I wanted to tell a story of someone's day without showing the person themselves. The person gets up, gets dressed, gets their school bag, gets in the car, gets to a school, waits in a classroom, goes into their school, goes home, rides a quad, goes to bed and repeats. I like the quad picture because it was fun to take even though I had to slow down. I like the pictures my hand is in the best. I think they're pretty good pictures.
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Jack Malkowski
5/31/2017 10:47:21 am
This is a great example of a day in life. I like how you have your hand grabbing out for things. In the first picture, I think you should remove the light from it. Otherwise great job.
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Halle Phillips
5/31/2017 10:48:04 am
I really like how you told the story without showing the person. I think you could've put your hand in all of the pictures, because seeing them with your hand tells more of a story than the ones without. I like your first picture the best, of the alarm clock because it shows good red on black and shows when you get up every morning.
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Amelia Pearson
5/31/2017 11:00:17 am
I really like the image of the alarm clock, I think that the brightness of it really stands out in the darkness of the room. I think if you cropped the bright in the one corner it would be better.
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